So there's this kid named Edgar. He has some cool qualities, well, he can have the cool qualities. He has the potential, he chills with the "cool" crew, but then he acts a little shady he goes and hangs with the "lames", ditching us in the process. And recently he's been really sort of unsure of what style he wants to pick. First he was on his hispanic style, dressing up like a typical hispanic. Then he was sort of on his skate boarder style. And now the guy has the nerve to grow out his hair, but i don't know if he's doing it to look different and start a new style.
me : yo edgar was gooodd
edgar : nothing mannnn chillin
me: why you been growing your hair?
edgar : cuz i look cool man , you should do it too, ladies love it mann
me : ehhh i dont know, you some kinky nigga...( i walk away shaking my head)
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I like your story. Its short yet it explains it all! i have a friend who is just the same way. and i know exactly what u meant by making your character walk away "shaking your head". Sounds like this Edgar guy is living a secret life, or maybe hes just bootyblind? anywhoo, its a good story. i look forward to reading your next short story.
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