this is for the hw #4 where u didnt grade me for...smh

for Stephanies Post, this is what I wrote

Nice post hermanita! I agree, we are indeed being brain washed, and the funny part is that we all know we are, yet we seem to continue to let it keep happening. As for the train ride, we had so much fun on those, but maybe we put the headphones because we were just too exhausted from the day we had, because when we went to the beach, we had so much fun, and had energy well spent. Maybe isolation is sometimes good, like why must everyone think that isolation is not good and you have to socialize. If you have everything you need and are happy on the inside then why waste your time with some un-important people. Thankfully, I am not one of those addicted to twitter, although I am kind of addicted to facebook. I really don't get a kick out of seeing what everyone is doing. Maybe in your next post you can make counter arguements, see the other side of the story so the reader can understand you on a more deeper level. Bye :D

For Anias' post this is what i wrote

nice post! I liked the ideas you brought up in your post. I often find myself going through the same exact things. Me, for example, when I'm work, tend to get really distracted by my phone. As hard as I may try, I still cannot seem to get away from my phone for enough, I can put it down for maybe 5 -10 minutes at a time. I hate when I don't look at my planner though, and I hate the fact that one can get in that state of addiction with things even as serious as school. In your next post, you should expand on your idea of distractions, especially if you can name numerous ways you may get distracted. I hope to comment on your posts soon again, see ya later buddy !

For jessica's post this is what i wrote

Good first post! I liked how you spoke about ideas which are most common with people our age, you pointed out specific moments where many of us tend to get addicted to and also think about. Now-a-days we do all tend to get really addicted to watching particular t.v shows , being on social networking websites, or just being crazy glued down to your computer. I've gone through this myself, as I realize myself, in addiction mode, with all the new technology, but yet somehow I still can't seem to get myself out of the bad habits. In your next post, you should try elaborating more on your ideas, because I feel you have very bright ones, but your lack in elaboration does not make your post as insightful as it could possibly be. Fare well, take care :]